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The Daily Prophet => The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) => : Sardius Fletcher 08 Jan 2012, 07:44 PM
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First and Last Name: Sardius Fletcher
Bloodline: Half-blood
Hair Color: Dark brown/black.
Eye Color: Bright blue.
General Build: Average.
Height: Average.
Birthplace: London.
Brief Childhood History: Sardius was born on September 14. His father, Erick Fletcher, was a wizard and was in Hufflepuff at Hogwarts. His mother, named Julia, is a Muggle. He was born the third youngest of four boys. His older brothers, Monty and Archie, were both on their house Quidditch teams. (Monty was in Gryffindor, Archie was in Hufflepuff.) Monty is 6 years older than him and Archie is 3 years older. He has a younger brother named Palmer and he was born when Sardius was 4, so he's 7 when Sardius is 11. He's very close to his brothers, especially Palmer. He's kind of protective of Palmer, because Palmer's really small compared to most kids his age. They've shared a room for as long as they can remember.
His mother's entire side of the family doesn't know about magic or the wizarding world so they think that they go to a fancy shmancy boarding school, as do all his friends. He lives in a Muggle neighborhood, so he isn't allowed to talk about magic or have any kind of magical items at his house. But his family has raised dogs and horses and different kinds of (Muggles') animals his entire life, so he loves all kinds of animals. Care of Magical Creatures is likely to be his favorite class. His mom has given him piano lessons since he was young, but he wouldn't tell anyone.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): He's attractive, kind of quiet, but he's polite and gets good grades. Like I said before, he's especially good at Care of Magical Creatures, but he's good in most of his classes if he tries hard enough. He's very trustworthy and wouldn't ever betray a friend. He's humble, as in he doesn't really know that he's attractive. And he'd never tell you, but he can play the piano well.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): He's terrible at Quidditch. He's attractive and quiet, which combined together, could be found as stuck up. If he isn't good at something when he first tries it (which is often, obviously, nobody's good at everything) he stops trying. In other words, he gets frustrated easily. For example, he acts like Quidditch shouldn't matter, even though he wishes he were good at it. He finds History of Magic extremely boring and finds it hard to concentrate. He isn't very good with Transfiguration or Charms, but if he tries hard enough, he's good enough to pass.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Gryffindor. He would fit into Ravenclaw alright, even if he's not top of the class. He's not ambitious or cunning enough for Slytherin and he isn't patient or dedicated like Hufflepuffs are. He doesn't really mind what house he's Sorted into though.
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Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.
We require at least a solid 2-3 paragraphs for the history section, so please try and elaborate more on what you already have. Whilst doing that, you'll probably want to reword the part where you say that Sardius has "never been able to practice much outside of school". If you mean practise magic, then you should know that he'd never be allowed to do it even if he wasn't living in a muggle neighbourhood.
Also, we have strict rules against godmodding and in the strengths section, saying that girls find Sardius attractive would fall under that category. You have no control over how other characters will react to Sardius, so please edit the wording on this. Please also provide us with some academic weaknesses for Sardius.
Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!
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Oh okay!! I wasn't sure if that was godmoding or not because it was kind of a general group. I wasn't sure, I should have been more careful with it though. I also reevaluated the history thing...I also revised the What-House-He-Should-Be-In paragraph afterwards; I felt it wasn't correct.
So anything else I should fix? :)
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Everything looks great now and thank you for editing. Sometimes we get people who don't really know what godmodding is, so I just wanted to make sure. ;)
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