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The Daily Prophet => The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) => : Rory Toole 05 Dec 2011, 12:48 AM
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First And Last Name: Rory Toole
Bloodline: Half Blood
Hair Colour: Hazel
Eye Colour: Green
General Build:Average
Height: Very Tall
Birthplace: London, England
Brief Childhood History: Rory grew up in Central London, at one with the hustle and bustle of the city. His days were spent entertaining his many friends with his magic tricks, they just couldnt work out how he did it.
Home life was simple and happy, well, as simple as you can get with a muggle father and magic mother. His little siter Emilie would be entertained for hours by his tricks, herself not showing such obvious magical ability. Although Rory enjoyed the busy, streets of London, he could not wait to recieve his letter, stamped with the coat of arms, inviting him to Hogwarts.
Strengths: Rory is an approachable, sociable person, always looking out for his mates and entertaining them as much as possible. At his muggle school, he exedelled at English, building up a good grammar and vocabulary, and arming him with skills of communication. Rory is a very academically gifted person, he picks things up quickly, and is very skillful at things after little practice. At Hogwarts, it has always been clear Rory will excell at Defence Against the Dark Arts and Charms. His use of magic, even without a wand has been very advanced and he has determination and enthusiasm in the subjects will enable him to go far. Another strength is Rory's ability to not just be brave for himself, but to get others around him to feel brave and courageous, he is a good leader.
Weaknesses: Rory, in his haste to see the right things happen, to stand up for those he cares for, can sometimes act brash and carelessly, putting himself in danger or punishment. He also struggles academically with Divination and Care of Magical Creatures. In Divination, he just does not seem to posses what is required and loses determiantion and interest. In Care of Magical Creatures, Rory struggles because of his unenhusiastic approach, and little interest in the subject. HE see's it as a lesson that requires not a lot of skill and finds it very boring. Another weakness of Rory's is too trust people to easily. As he is so approachable and friendly he may be drawn in by false pretences, and be misled.
House: I think the best house for Rory would be Gryffindor, the home of the brave at heart. Rory posses the qualities required for this house and since a youngster has always wanted to be put in Gryffindor. However maybe Ravenclaw but i think Gryffindor is where Rory belongs, due to his courage, willing, and determination.
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Hey! Welcome to HPRPG!
Before we can sort you, we ask that you use the Official HPRPG Character Sheet, exactly as it is provided. You've left out a few categories. If you would please go back and make sure you've included every field, as it appears on the official sheet, then we can go forth with sorting you.
Once you've made changes, change the title of this thread from 'pending' to 'edited.' Thanks!
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Before we can sort you, we ask that you use the Official HPRPG Character Sheet, exactly as it is provided. You've left out a few categories. If you would please go back and make sure you've included every field, as it appears on the official sheet, then we can go forth with sorting you.
Stiiiill don't quite have it~ Again, you need to use the ~*Official HPRPG Character Sheet*~ exactly as is without shortcuts! :D
You know the drill with the title~
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You almost have the sheet correct. You've still shortened the last section though. So instead of 'house', please keep the original header provided for you.
In addition, we will need at least one more paragraph on Rory's history. While doing this, could you also explain what you mean by 'magic tricks'? At that age, Rory would not be able to control his magic and actually perform spells, let alone in front of muggles; it is against wizarding law of course.
In the strengths section, you mention that Rory has advanced use of wandless magic. You will need to edit this out because children at Rory's age would not have the skill to perform wandless magic. He, like all children, will have had spouts of uncontrolled magic which is of course wandless, but as I said above, he would have no control over when or how these happen.
Once again, just change the title when you're done.
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As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)