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The Daily Prophet => The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) => : Danielle Wren 01 Nov 2011, 03:39 PM

: Danielle Wren - Denied
: Danielle Wren 01 Nov 2011, 03:39 PM
First and Last Name: Danielle Wren

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Bloodline: Half-blood
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Cornflower Blue (Left), Tree-bark Brown (Right)
General Build: Average
Height: Tall
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Birthplace: Dublin, Ireland

Brief Childhood History:

Danielle was born to Augustine Wren, an herbalist, on July 31st in Dublin, Ireland. Raised between her mother and her grandmother, Alexandria Faith Wren, she grew up traveling between the flat she shared with her mother in Dublin and her grandmother’s townhouse in Paris. Exposed to two different cultures from birth, Danielle quickly learned to accept everyone and everything as they were, and not to dislike a person or creature just because of how they came into the world.

When she was ten years old, Danielle learned that her father, who she had never spared a thought for before, was suddenly insisting that he be present in her life. She agreed to meet him and, though their relationship remained awkward, grew to, not necessarily like him, but to accept his sporadic presence in her life. On her eleventh birthday, she received her letter to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Just as happy as any other child to finally attend school, she dreamed and pined after the day she would finally take the train. To her father, a muggle through and through, she explained that she had been accepted to a prep school and could no longer meet with him week by week as she had been.

Proud, though still extremely awkward, as he was, her father objected to her leaving the country for school at such a young age. A fight quickly ensued, into which her mother had to step to remind her father that he had no parental rights what-so-ever, as he had given them up by abandoning Danielle at birth. Discouraged by her father, Danielle almost decided not to go to Hogwarts. But, as September first grew nearer and nearer, she decided that she wouldn’t let a mere opinion from a man she barely knew to affect something she had been looking forward to for years.

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Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Care of Magical Creatures (because she loves animals), Herbology (she inherited her interest from her mother), Potions (she sees it as a kind of extension of Herbology), Flying, speaking in front of crowds (because she's never been afraid to voice her opinion), throwing left hooks
 
Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Transfiguration (the subject just doesn't sem to work for her), History of Magic (because it's boring and frankly just puts her too sleep), has a rather short temper for people who are being annoying or obnoxious on purpose (because nobody likes it when someone does that)

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:

Danielle belongs in Gryffindor more than any other House just because of the kind of person she is. She would never discriminate against a person or a magical being just because of what their family tree was like and she also realizes that life itself is about learning, not just getting better grades than anyone else. She’s very opinionated and has no problems what-so-ever about sharing them with someone, but she won’t try to force them down someone’s throat just because their opinion is different. She would be more likely to keep making points and argue with a person to try and understand their point of view.
: Re: Danielle Wren
: Tany 01 Nov 2011, 09:54 PM
Heya Danielle and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, we ask that you don't list her strengths and weaknesses. Instead, we'd like to see them fleshed out a bit. Could you maybe add in a few 'why's? For example, why is speaking her mind a strength or why is singing out loud a weakness?

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there.
: Re: Danielle Wren - Edited
: Tany 18 Nov 2011, 02:06 AM
Thank you for editing~ :biglove:

However, and I apologize for any miscommunication, but I meant for you to write it out in paragraph form. ^^; It's still pretty much a list, you know? Full sentences, no paragraphs, that sort of thing~ Feel free to check some approved applications for a better idea.

You know the drill with the title~ <3
: Re: Danielle Wren - Pending
: Jayce 01 Dec 2011, 10:24 PM
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)