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The Daily Prophet => The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) => : Kilee Black 23 Oct 2011, 02:25 PM
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First and Last Name: Kilee Black Bloodline: pure blood
Hair Color:red
Eye Color: green
General Build: petite
Height: short
Birthplace:Dublin, Ireland
Brief Childhood History: Kilee grew up in a household that accepted, and used magic on a regular basis. She rarely saw her dad, Mark Black, because he was always working. Her mum, Alicia Black has had the most influence on Kilee. Kilee went for a few years to a muggle school before receiving her letter. She was pulled out of the muggle school, because she couldn't control her magic properly.
When Kilee was eight, her parents divorced. The divorce was very tough on her. She stayed with her mother, but kept her fathers sir name. Later, when she had a better handle on her magic, she went back into muggle school.
Strengths: Kilee is good at charms,and transfiguration. Another one of her strengths is that she is very optimistic.
Weaknesses: potions, and history of magic are her worst subjects. She is sensative when it comes to talking about her family.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel that Kilee should be placed in Gryffindor because she always strives to do whats right. She is also truthful, and loyal.
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Heya Kilee and welcome to HPRPG~!
First, holy poo, you've been waiting since October! :O I'm thinking you got passed over 'cause you had 'pending' in the title and, upon first glance, sort of leaves the staff thinking you've been taking care of. ^^; In the future please make sure to not add 'pending' to avoid this and don't hesitate to PM us if you've been left to wait for this long (I only even realized you were still waiting thanks to your friend. :sweatdrop:)! :biglove:
Onto your sheet, though~ First, could you add a little more history- what sort of things did she do for fun, did she have any friends while attending muggle school (did they wonder why she left and came back?), or even why her pureblooded parents allowed her to attend muggle school? Just a few ideas, of course. Also, could you give us more than one strength and weakness? Everyone has more than one, after all, and it helps us get a better grasp of the sort of person Kilee is! Make sure to include a 'why', too, otherwise it's just listing traits and that's no good~
Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.
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As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)