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The Daily Prophet => The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) => : Karine MacLeod 11 Oct 2011, 02:54 PM
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First and Last Name: Karine MacLeod
Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Light Brown
General Build: Petite
Height: Short
Birthplace: Bristol, UK
Brief Childhood History:
Karine was born into a very loving wizarding family. Both of her parents attended Hogwarts. Her father, Stephen MacLoed was a Hufflepuff and muggleborn, while her mother, Maridiff MacLeod (Formally Prewett) was a Gryffindor and a pureblood. Her Parents were married right out of Hogwarts, and had her 3 years later.
Karine grew up around magic, she knew exactly what it was, but with her father being a muggleborn and all, she also grew up around Muggles, and Muggle items. She loved being around two social groups, being apart of two different worlds. On days that her father was particularly happy after work, he would turn on his old record play and put on hits from the 60s. Then he would sweep up Karine and dance with her. When Karine would get tired, it was her mother’s turn. Karine loved seeing her parents like this, they were truly happy and truly in love.
Karine was very close to both of her parents. She loved them with all of her heart and could not wait to be just like them, but for some reason she always felt a little closer to her father. Maybe it was because she was the spitting image of him; maybe it was his friendly, Hufflepuff attitude. She didn't know, probably never will. But with the death of her mother (something she is not always willing to share) she grew even closer to her father, He became her trusted adviser and will always be there for her, he's a true Hufflepuff.
When Karine received her letter, her father was overjoyed, that day he took her to get her school supplies, and gave her advice for the year. Which classes are the best, which classes are the worst, which teachers are the nicest, places to avoid, what to do, what not to do, and most overall, which houses would suit her the best.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Karine is very friendly and sweet, and very kind. People that she meets always seem to think highly of her. They tend to like her attitude and bright outlook on life. She is a very good listener, which is always handy in class and as a friend. Classes that Karine would probably excel at are Herbology and Charms. She absolutely adores life and has loved to study plants since she was little. She also enjoys the practical use of Charms, it will be very handy, and probably something she can do well.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Karine is kind of passive; she is not very out spoken so she doesn’t really get noticed, either at first or at all. Her self-esteem on a level of 1-10 is a 5, its not very good. So this means she is usually down on herself about almost everything. At and academic sense, potions would probably be her weakness, the exact science to it all would have her very confused and completely lost.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
The house that Karine fits most into would be Hufflepuff. Karine is very loyal and caring. She is also an extremely Hard worker. In many ways she is just like her father who had been the epitome of the Hufflepuff house in his time. So the house of Helga Hufflepuff is the perfect place for Karine.
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Heya Karine and welcome to HPRPG~!
However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing! First, we ask that you don't list the strengths and weaknesses. Instead, we'd like some 'why' surrounding those areas. Why are those strengths important, why are they strengths, and the same with weaknesses.
Maybe also re-read some parts of the history, 'cause there are some random capitalization errors, a few spots that had periods although the sentence continues on, and whatnot. Maybe toss it through spell-check as well. ;3
Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there.
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